Cheetos

A modern-day Man Cave. With a DART WALL, a POOL TABLE, COMFY COUCHES, DEEP CHAIRS, A PINBALL MACHINE and a CARD TABLE.

This…would become…

…THIS!

And this…would become…

…this.

Back to the top of the story, though.

The LONG PUSH-IN would begin about here, and continue towards our Hero with his hand in the bag until it arrived…

…about here, which is when he’d lift his RIGHT HAND out of the bag, EAT a CHEETOS, hold his CHEELTE-COVERED fingers up to keep things tidy, and select a DART from the rack of darts his pal has just walked up with.

And here he is THROWING a DART.

Now let’s check out the rest of the room…

A CARD TABLE, which is a place for something to happen…

…like maybe we cut to a GUEST with a DART poking out of one of the CARDS he’s holding.

Or a shot of ANOTHER GUEST staring at a DART stuck to the CUBE of CHALK she’s holding.

Or a CLOSE-UP of ANOTHER GUEST staring at the DART sticking out of her SUB SANDWICH. And see those home theater chairs behind her?

What if we replaced those chairs with a PINBALL MACHINE? How could our guy not have a PINBALL MACHINE?

That’s why I’m recommending this location—it gives us room to make things happen.